Like I have said, I decided to write an outline this time and I really like it. I think I like it because I enjoy having a map, basically. I transferred all my written documents to a slideshow that I am adding to as I read Anatomy of Story.
I'm keeping my same characters, but I renamed Kiera. She is now Larkin. :) This picture is best, because in the second chapter, she is wearing a crimson gown.
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Of course this is Barren. He's older here, actually. I'll have to find a younger Barren Reed. I decided to make him eighteen in my books.
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My wonderful Aladdin is playing around with photoshop, too and will have a map ready for me at some point. lol. Probably when I finish this book in a few months, lol.
Okay, there's an update for you. It's not much, but I hope you enjoy the pictures, and tell me what you think of the name Larkin. Do you like it? Also, would anyone like to read a bit of the new first chapter I've been working on?
I HEART Larkin! And, please, please, please can you write me into this book?! I can be an extra--Barren's personal assistant, perhaps?? Shoot, I'll even change his chamber pot. *swoons*
ReplyDeleteYAY! LOL. Yes, I think that is possible! hahaha. Personal assistant is wayyyyy better than changing a chamber pot!
DeleteLOL! Bethany as the chamber (pot) maid. :DDD
DeleteI am dying to read your story. i feel awful that you are such a fan of my writing and I have hardly read anything of yours.
ReplyDeletewow...remember to breathe!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your story!!! From the bits and pieces you'd thrown my way so far. Though I like the name Kiera better. Lol...I don't know why, but Larkins remind me of Lando in the Star Wars.
ReplyDeleteAshley, it sounds like you're having fun rewriting your story. :) Good for you!!
ReplyDeletedroooools over your gorgeous characters, such beautiful pictures and i love the drawings. Oh man, this is gonna be good!
ReplyDeleteAndrea
I like the name Keira better, Larkin is weird but interesting at the same time. I like what I have read of the old version, this whole new story is weird to get used to, even though I didn't get to finish the first story, I would love read both versions. -Jennifer Chezem
ReplyDeleteTell your friend I like the drawing as well. I wish I could fail at art like that!
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